Liam's Learning Journey
Thursday, September 8, 2022
BLOOG DEVOTIONS REFLECTION
Wednesday, August 3, 2022
A limerick of a cricket
Limerick is a short poem that only has 5 lines, it's sometimes funny, the 1st, 2nd and 5thhave to rhyme with each over, and the 3rd and 4th have to rhyme with each over as well.
I once knew a cricket
Every day he brought a lottery ticket
He became rich
But still lived in a ditch
That's the cricket who brought a ticket. I’m leaving this school
Tuesday, June 21, 2022
Jonah's Pride
The Bible records many stories about "forgiving". The Lord Jesus also taught us like this: when we forgive men when they sin against us, our heavenly father will also forgive us. However, it's hard to forgive from our hearts. With God’s help you can forgive.
Your assignment is to research "forgiving", in the bible and share what you learned. You will need to use reference material such as biblegateway.com or search engines to locate stories of forgiveness in the Bible.
Begin by brainstorming possible topics and bible references
Create your own framework to record bible references you will read, key events within it and your thoughts. In week 8 you will use this to write what you learned from the bible about forgiveness.
How did I go ⚫ ✅ ✅✅ ✅✅✅ | My self-assessment |
I can use reference material to locate starting points (bible stories) relevant to forgiveness | ✅ |
I can create a framework to record my key ideas and notes | ⚫ |
I can read the bible independently | ✅✅ |
I can use my notes to write about what I learned about forgiveness | ⚫ |
Teacher comment |
Monday, June 20, 2022
forgiveness article Reading Response
Sunday, June 19, 2022
First Hot Task
Sentences variety
Figurative and descriptive language
Most exciting part
Dad was rushing outside, Ryder was not in site “Ryder- come back here” Dad yelled. Then he found Ryder. He was hiding around the bush” what are you doing?”Dad asked Ryder's eyes started to burst with tears“how come all of the other people have water, but not us” Ryder cried, then he just ran back home and buried his face into mum. Mum can see Ryder's guilt” are you ok sweetie,” Mum said in a sweet voice” I regret what I've done, stealing water that's wrong.”
Solution
“I just want water, you guys work for AQUA-PLEX How come we don't get water” Ryder cried. “ Because we're broke,” mum laughed. “Our grass needs water, look at it, it's parched and our clothes stink,” said Ryder, then it started to rain. Dad got back inside, dad apologized to Ryder.” I know we don’t have water, but it's bad to steal, don’t do it again” said Dad “ok dad,” Ryder said in a sad voice.
Ending
“Now it's raining, our grass will be growing now” brook happily said,” let's go outside and see what it looks like!”Brook said well jumping with joy then Ryder and Brook went to play our side well it's raining, they had a fun afternoon well it’s raining. It was the first time in ages, it felt like years without water then Brooke got some bowls for the water to go in. They can finally drink.