First Hot Task

In class we read First, our task was to make up our own ending of the story...
Sentences variety 
Figurative  and descriptive language 

Most exciting part

Dad was rushing outside, Ryder was not in site “Ryder- come back here” Dad yelled. Then he found Ryder. He was hiding around the bush” what are you doing?”Dad asked Ryder's eyes started to burst with tears“how come all of the other people have water, but not us” Ryder cried, then he just ran back home and buried his face into mum. Mum can see Ryder's guilt” are you ok sweetie,” Mum said in a sweet voice” I regret what I've done, stealing water that's wrong.”

Solution

“I just want water, you guys work for AQUA-PLEX How come we don't get water” Ryder cried. “ Because we're broke,” mum laughed. “Our grass needs water, look at it, it's parched and our clothes stink,” said  Ryder, then it started to rain. Dad got back inside, dad apologized to Ryder.” I know we don’t have water, but it's bad to steal, don’t do it again” said Dad “ok dad,” Ryder said in a sad voice.

Ending 

“Now it's raining, our grass will be growing now” brook happily said,” let's go outside and see what it looks like!”Brook said well jumping with joy then Ryder and Brook went to play our side well it's raining, they had a fun afternoon well it’s raining. It was the first time in ages, it felt like years without water then Brooke got some bowls for the water to go in. They can finally drink.